@@ -11,15 +11,15 @@ However, some changes though are "substantial", and we ask that these be put thr
 The "RFC" (Request For Comments) process is intended to provide a consistent, controlled path for new features to enter the project, so that all stakeholders and contributors can be confident about the direction the project is evolving in.
 
 ## When to follow this process
-You should consider using this process if you intend to make "substantial" changes in any Functionland project or the documentation. Here are some examples of things that would benefit from an RFC:
+You should consider using this process if you intend to make "substantial" changes in any Fula Network project or the documentation. Here are some examples of things that would benefit from an RFC:
 - A new feature that requires rethinking of something that has already been developed and shipped.
 - A change in the documentation structure in order to enhance readers experience.
-- The introduction of a new idea, concept or convention that is currently not present in Functionland.
+- The introduction of a new idea, concept or convention that is currently not present in the Fula Network.
 
 The RFC process will help you attract more attention to your proposal, as well as make sure that everybody gets a chance to participate in shaping and polishing your new idea.
 
 ## About the process
-In short, to get a major feature added to any of Functionland's projects, you would first get the RFC merged into the RFC repo of that project as a markdown file.  At that point the RFC is ‘active’ and may be implemented with the goal of eventual inclusion.
+In short, to get a major feature added to any of the Fula Network projects, you would first get the RFC merged into the RFC repo of that project as a markdown file.  At that point the RFC is ‘active’ and may be implemented with the goal of eventual inclusion.
 * Fork the project repository
 * Copy `rfcs/template.md` to `rfcs/0000-my-feature/README.md` (where my-feature is descriptive, don't ask for an RFC number yet)
 * Put any accompanying resources (pictures, etc.) in rfcs/0000-my-feature/.  You can refer to these in the text.
 
@@ -28,6 +28,6 @@ And a network explorer is made avaialbe here:
 [Network Explorer](https://functionyard.fx.land)
 
 ## Simulation
-Finally functionlard token simulations are available here: 
+Finally token simulations are available here: 
 
 [Token Simulation](https://machinations.io/community/functionland/new-fula-tokenomics-333bc093169911ee915c02f943517e50)
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
 :::caution WIP Alert
-Please note: these instructions remain a work in progress as we continue to evolve, refine and perfect the Fula API.  Make sure to check back soon for more details!
+Please note: these instructions remain a work in progress as the Fula API evolves.  Make sure to check back soon for more details!
@@ -208,5 +208,5 @@ Ext4 is a linux standard that Windows does not support without some third-party
     4. Continue _[Manually Partition and Format for Mac](#macos-terminal)_ instructions, from step 7.
 
 :::info 
-**Our apps are open-source and built in React Native for cross-platform support. So if you would like to [contribute to the project](https://github.com/functionland/fx-components), that would be greatly appreciated!**
+**The apps are open source and built in React Native for cross-platform support. Contributions are welcome at [fx-components](https://github.com/functionland/fx-components).**
 :::
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ Adding more than one Blox no longer requires logging out and back in. From the w
 5. Check them all under the **Blox** tab.
 
 :::info
-**Our apps are open source. If you would like to [contribute to the project](https://github.com/functionland/fxblox-web), that would be greatly appreciated!**
+**The apps are open source. Contributions are welcome at [fxblox-web](https://github.com/functionland/fxblox-web).**
 :::
 
 ## Format Drive
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ It is important to know which Blox you have. The manual firmware update process
         </ol>
 </TabItem>
 <TabItem value="Plus" label="FxBlox Lite Plus (RK1)">
-    The FxBlox Lite Plus has a CPU from Rockchip, it is alternatively known as the <b>RK1</b>. About <b>900</b> of these were distributed during our Indiegogo delivery phase. So it is highly likely you have this model. Other than that there are two key ways to tell if you have this model.
+    The FxBlox Lite Plus has a CPU from Rockchip, it is alternatively known as the <b>RK1</b>. About <b>900</b> of these were distributed during the Indiegogo delivery phase. So it is highly likely you have this model. Other than that there are two key ways to tell if you have this model.
 <ol type="1">
     <li> <b>Check the barcode.</b> On the side of the original box that the device came in. It should start with <b>`RK1`</b>, like this.
     <img src="/img/fxyard-network/nostorage-rk1.jpg" style={{width: 450}}/>
 
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ id: join-windows
 ---
 import ReactPlayer from 'react-player';
 
-This guide is for getting a Fula node installed on a Windows machine and adding it to testnet. To get an invite, you can ask a community memeber in Telegram or Discord. If already a Blox or NFT owner, you can join testnet with Indiegogo order or wallet address, respectively.
+This guide is for getting a Fula node installed on a Windows machine and adding it to testnet.  If already a Blox or NFT owner, you can join testnet with Indiegogo order or wallet address, respectively.
 
 ## Video Guide
 
 
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Troubleshooting
 
-This section contains solutions to common issues you might encounter while using FxBlox and the Functionland ecosystem.
+This section contains solutions to common issues you might encounter while using FxBlox and the Fula ecosystem.
 
 ## Common Issues
 
 
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ To get started, you'll need the following equipment:
 - For RK1 bloxes: internal m.2 nvme drive, external storage as mentioned above, or [framework expansion cards](https://frame.work/marketplace/expansion-cards)
 - Optional: USB-C to ethernet adaptors and USB-C to HDMI for additional connectivity
 
-Functionland does not get any kickback or royalties from the sale of Framework expansion cards. We recommend them because we designed the FxBlox case and modularity around their small form factor standard.
+No kickback or royalties were received from the sale of Framework expansion cards. They are recommended because the FxBlox case and modularity were designed around their small form factor standard.
 
 ## 2. Identifying Your Blox
 It is important you know which FxBlox you have before you move onto the setup stage! It will determine which route you follow, how you get support, and what software is compatible with your device. Checkout the [How To Identify Your FxBlox](/functionyard/hardware/fxblox-hardware) guide to learn more!
 
@@ -23,15 +23,15 @@ Which is when we realized, there was no single chain agnostic token we can use t
 
 ### Enter $FULA token
 
-**$FULA** will be the catalyst for keeping the infrastructure online at all times and getting users to store their photos and video, for as long as they want. Storage providing and compute providers are two sides of the same coin. Providers require payment for offering their service to the public. And consumers need a corresponding way to pay for said services.
+**$FULA** is intended to keep the infrastructure online and getting users to store their photos and video, for as long as they want. Storage providing and compute providers are two sides of the same coin. Providers require payment for offering their service to the public. And consumers need a corresponding way to pay for said services.
 
 ### Enter [BAS](./introduction/bas)
 
-The first uniform **Blockchain Attached Storage (BAS)** device was created. As a provider, you can use your storage device(s) to completely own your data and gain rewards for offering up your extra storage to the public. And as a consumer, can pay-as-you-go! It'll be like you have access to infinite storage and just pay for what you need to keep your data alive for as long as you like.
+The first uniform **Blockchain Attached Storage (BAS)** device was created. As a provider, you can use your storage device(s) to completely own your data and gain rewards for offering up your extra storage to the public. 
 
 ### Enter [FxBlox](./introduction/blox)
 
-FxBlox, or Blox, is the brand-new hardware that is empowering it all. Beautiful design, power-efficient board, and next-gen processing is not gate-kept by inflated pricing. Bloxes are competitively priced and offer the **<u>lowest</u>** barrier to entry in any decentralized storage blockchain. The network is designed to scale vertically and horizontally.
+FxBlox, or Blox, is the brand-new hardware that is empowering it all. Beautiful design, power-efficient board, and next-gen processing is not gate-kept by inflated pricing. Bloxes offer a low barrier to entry in decentralized storage. The network is designed to scale vertically and horizontally.
 
 ### Enter [Fula API](./api-intro)
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	`2`	`+Please note: these instructions remain a work in progress as the Fula API evolves. Make sure to check back soon for more details!`